雅思作文：吸烟年龄组对比(含音频)
10多年来，喜欢吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福一直把中文教得很好。 图标由他的家猫在这里分享他原创雅思创作晾衣架的各范文配音。 用同名的公众号“英语考试Cat”你好。 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。
今天，给您一篇雅思小作文的高分范文。
往常的规则，以下是正文目录。 1、主题2、高分范文3、范文朗读4、范文解析
上题： thechartsshowinformationaboutthepercentageofteenagerswhowerecigarettesmokersinaeuropeancountrybetween 1995 and 2005.summmara reportingthemainfeatures，andmakecomparisonswhererelevant。
-朗读- Model Answer高分范文-
范文语音戳此处thebarchartscomparetheproportionofsmokersrelativetogenderandagefortheyearsof 1995，2000，and 2005，in aeuropean cccopan
Overall，out of all three years，bothgendersin 1995 smokedlessthantheotheragebracketsintheotwoyearscited，with the 14-year-year
therehadbeenanincreaseinthenumberof 14-year-oldssmokingintheyear 2000 whencomparedto 1995 forbothgenders； however，in 2005，whiletheincreasingtrendcontinuedformale 14-year-olds，slightlyfewerfemale 14-year-oldsweresmoking， cominginatapproximately 17.5 %.likewise，thispatternremainedtrueformale 15 and 16-year-oldsin 2005 whencomparedtotheyear 2000 whear conversely，thepercentageof 14-year-oldboyssmokingcontinuedtoincreasetocomeinat 27 % in 2005。
thepatternfortheproportionoffemalesmokersdifferedslightly，however， andwashighestin 2005 for the 16-year-oldcategorytostandand an increase of3% from the year 2000，and similarly，theproportionof 15-of 15
- Essay Analysis范文解析-Standard Task 1 Phrases :小作文正式表达积累
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Cohesion(CCwordsandPhrases ) )如果善用这些简单的词，就可以在“一致性和联系”方面轻松得分
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